Sunday, September 26, 2010

Memoir 1

          I had been looking in the paper for weeks, and finally found something. Most ad's were too ambiguous or vague to tell if it would be right for us, this one was just specific enough. The paper advertised that they were free; that was a bonus for me.
         We got in our van and got going, the trip seemed excruciatingly long, as we had to get gas first. When we got there there were about five left, and one of them they wouldn't give away. Some of them were larger, and one was considerably smaller than the rest. We ended up getting a happy medium, one that definitely wasn't small or fat, this was a different body build. Muscle.
         We asked if we could have it, and they nodded from their chair. They gave us a can of food before we left. On the way home it was kind of smelly, as we got it from a farm. I still have it to this day, and play with it quite often. I have some unique photographs of it, as I fancy myself a bit of a photographer.


What was I writing about? When I got my dog Angel.

8 comments:

  1. Tome: Noun, a (usually) large and scholarly book

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  2. You should have probably have just mentioned that it was about getting you dog at the begining. Thats good though. Is that a real picture of you dog?

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  3. what's a tome and good job on the memoir! Give more verbs!!!

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  4. Yes that is a real photo of my dog.

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  5. You maybe should have said that it was a dog in the beginning. Otherwise you did a good job!!:)

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  6. I agree! I think you should have mentioned it was a dog in the begining. It was well written though!

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  7. Nice word choice. Mention that you're talking about a dog next time.

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